Feedback - Draft 1
Feedback Executive summary: You've explained the research used to conduct the report. You could remove some of the statements to make it more succinct and immediately begin to explain your findings conclusion and recommendations. These should be what is added within the executive summary. Introduction to the brand: This is a good start to the introduction. Macro economic analysis: good pestle factors have been identified within your report, consider further social factors that are impacting the Dolce and Gabbana brand such as diversity, equality and gender. Any other technological factors that could impact on the brand in this digitally driven age? Again, it is important to not just look at now but critique and justify the views in terms of the evidence from the past and the likely impact in the future of any particular influences. Brand market position: You've provided a some good level of detail through SWOT analysis for the brand including some good...